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Screen Writing: "Brevity is the Soul of Wit"
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Figure 5. Documentation, help, and even screens can benefit from diagrammatic presentation, or modular writing. Yes, it's more work then sentences when creating it. But the time saved across hundreds of users when reading it can be worth the investment. Decision tables reduce reading errors, too.

avoid paragraphs

 

Reduce Memory Work

Issue: Cryptowriting makes end-users remember too much. What about "acronym acrimony?" Acronyms are the AKA (Also Known As) for a phrase or product. When the definition remains TBD (To Be Determined) by the user we have a communication GAP (Greatly Aggravated Problem). And what about CMOS, BIS, CMS, and ICBM?

Solution: Avoid acronyms. On the other hand, seeing "International Business Machines" may be equally surprising to the user who expects to see "IBM." Therefore, stick with familiar acronyms like DOS, IRS, and BVDs!

Some corollary solutions to memory demands in screen writing:

  • Maintain consistent terminology, e.g., use standard button names (see Figure 6).
  • Avoid "read me" files! (They report discrepancies in the application.)

Who remembers the details when trying to use the application? We have an actual case that defies comprehension (see Figure 7).

Figure 6. Your design team should stick to a single button name for "OK" and "Cancel" functions. Here are alternatives we have seen. Note that "Close" has a special meaning in Microsoft-world. It indicates that the window disallows any edits, therefore, nothing can be "Canceled". Subsequently, Close is not a universal substitute for Cancel.

be consistent

   

Figure 7. An actual "read me" file. The screen terminology failed to match the associated paper forms. Therefore, the developer had to inflict this tutorial on the hapless end-user. Could you remember it when using the application?

wording inconsistency

 

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